So, this started out like many shows I've seen recently: a good, promising set-up and then a meh ending.
First question: do you feel like the story resolved? I don't.
So that makes me wonder if we are going to find a satisfying storyform. We may. But then I think it's going to indicate something else was off.
Anyway, I want to start back here:
I think this is too casual of a way to express the OS, and I think it's affecting how the Domains were chosen.
What is going on in the OS? Is everyone trying to reconcile there being two Miles? (Is his boss?)
I would say that the OS is more like: The fact that there are two Miles disrupts everything from Top Happy Spa, to the Advertising Agency, to the marriage.