I am writing a story and I have decided to resolve the story down to the event level.
It seems like I have looped time and space which gives the story a very grey feel to it.
This is great, I have tried giving the individual scenes to friends to read but they can't see the forest for the trees.
I'm thinking it's best to wait until I have completed signpost one to give them something to read.
Asking someone to make sense of a story from just a series of modalities at event level doesn't seem to be working for me.
I would like to know what you think.