The Domains of a Guy Stuck in a Well

The point was that the psychiatrist doesn’t claim to know with certainty what’s going on inside the patient. They work on probabilities. It’s the constant notion of absolute certainty in an objective storyform – regardless of how many times that storyform may need to be changed and revisited – that seems like it calls for an empirical test.

We’re sort of going round and round on this, and I’m not sure repetition is producing more understanding. So let’s say the conventional wisdom on this was true: there is a single, absolute objective storyform discernible for most movies (excluding broken ones) and this is the means by which one arrives at it. A Dramatica user therefore spends a fair number of years achieving a high level of proficiency with the model in order to reach a point where they can conceivably and with the help of several other similarly proficient users arrive at a storyform for a movie that might be right. Or, it might later turn out to be wrong once other proficient Dramatica users have spent time reconsidering it.

How does that benefit the Dramatica writer compared to the one who perhaps never achieves this zen-like objective view of story but instead devotes that portion of their time to writing and – equally importantly – to developing the many skills that are necessary to the writer’s craft but not solely concerned with structure? You can say they’re not mutually exclusive, but time is a finite resource whether you’re writing on the side or if it’s your day job.

I can only speak for my own profession, but I cannot imagine someone thinking this was a sound approach to becoming a novelist. Writing is an incredibly rich and multi-faceted activity. Prose matters – it takes constant study and practice. Rhetoric matters – an Aaron Sorkin monologue isn’t easy to achieve. Ideation matters – the ideas don’t come out of thin air. Research matters. Having a sense of the boundaries of suspension of disbelief within one’s genre and sub-genre matters. And yes, structure matters, too, but the notion of spending so many hundreds of hours of time hoping to reach a point where you can kind-of, sort-of, in a group analyze a movie or book?

The only thing that makes this level of compromise between craft skills necessary is this commitment to the notion that there’s only one right storyform. That belief is likely to cost a bachelor’s degree’s worth of study and even then requires debate and consensus and later revision. It’s got vastly more in common with an academic endeavour than a creative one – making for an interesting life pursuit, but putting Dramatica’s usability so far out of reach of most writers that I’d imagine many if not most simply get frustrated and move on to something else.

I can still see the virtue in a Dramatica Expert as a story consultant (something I’ve leaned on @jhull for many times), and I can see the four throughlines as a useable guide for most writers (who can get the idea of distinguishing between OS, MC, IC, and RS and benefit from them), but as someone who’s spent a few years with Dramatica and put quite a bit of time and thought into it, the analysis process – which constantly gets referenced as vital to being able to use Dramatica for story creation – ends up looking indistinguishable from an exercise in sophistry.

Maybe the middle ground is finding “levels” of Dramatica which deliver different benefits as you go for a deeper and deeper understanding and so each user finds their natural stopping point. For me there’s tons of value in the model and the questions it poses – it’s been helpful in a number of my published novels – but the point of diminishing returns is at the notion of buying into the idea of extracting singular objective storyform from a finished work.

@jhull: I’m still up for writing an entirely dramatica-driven novel sometime, though!

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Some of the discussion here is above my pay grade right now, but, I read something this morning that reminded me of the debate going on within this thread. I’m referring specifically to the argument that some stories may be better served by assigning the same domain to multiple throughlines instead of forcing a pseudo-arbitrary four-way split.
http://dramatica.com/questions/concept/domains/all

See the final section “Why do all four Domains have to be explored?”, especially the final paragraph:
‘Using different perspectives on the same domain shows the effects of the inequity within the different contexts of the perspective. This may give us a greater understanding of the difference in the perspectives, but it would not give us any greater understanding of the inequity as it is expressed in that single domain. Conflict does not exist BETWEEN a domain and a perspective, so shifting perspectives on a domain will not provide more insight into the nature of the inequity.’

Apols in advance if I am missing the point (I’m a Dramatica Neophyte), but, in the spirit of trying to contribute:

For me, I am happy to assign throughlines to domains and know that some feel more ‘spot on’ than others.
This is no problem for me even if I think the ‘other’ throughlines would feel better were they to be assigned to the same domain as one that has already been assigned.
I don’t object to the ‘others’ feeling a little more arbitrary in that they now have to be juxtaposed with their partner throughline. It doesn’t bother me because I intuit that not all strands of my story have to be dialled up to 11. It’s a question of emphasis and perspective.
The most important throughlines for my narrative get preferential assignation in the domains. The ‘other’ domains/throughlines serve to explore those important domains (even though they may do so at a lower volume than that favoured by Spinal Tap!).
I’m OK with this because I know I can’t give equal weight to everything. I also know I need all four throughlines represented if I am to satisfactorily explore my key domains, which carry the bulk of my story’s message.
Now, if I decided to change the emphasis of the same story, then I might shuffle the domains/throughlines to give preference, or more volume to one of the ‘other’ domains to achieve this, but I’m still happy to move the others around again so I have just one domain per throughline. I’m happy to move the them around to make space for my new key domain/throughline because even with this shift in emphasis/perspective, I need to have the other three represented in order to explore the subject fully.

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Agreed. You have a specific question (is there truly, certifiably one absolute storyform per complete story) that you want a yes/no answer to, but the rest of us don’t think that either yes or no are entirely true, so we keep altering the question.

You should ask Chris Huntley directly, because I don’t think we’re going to satisfy you here.

Finding a storyform requires many things to happen.

At some point, a story is made. Preceding this, or simultaneous to its creation, the Story is organized in the author’s mind, it is illustrated and then it is expressed.

Then it is shared. Then we interpret it and we decode it.

That’s, like seven steps.

When I illustrate something, it’s going to become more “Mike” than a pure storyform. Then when I write it, my goal isn’t just to get the Story across, but to make it compelling. So now it’s Storyform + Mike + Spellbinding.

Then you watch it or read it and it’s Storyform + Mike + Spellbinding + You + “I’ve never understood Mike all that well”. And if I want to be honest, I’ll add in this step, which I’ll just call “people higher up on the hierarchy that think you need to tweak this part just a little bit.”

Unravelling this takes effort, and it’s fallible.

But I hope one day, you lock in on a storyform, see it in all its holistic glory and understand.

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I had a similarly worded sentiment expressed to me the other day by a nicely-dressed fellow carrying a bible. :wink:

Seriously, though, I’m grateful for the extended discussion and everyone’s contributions. I’m actually more comfortable now with ambiguity in the interpretive process. I still see value in looking at a film or book and trying to place it within a storyform as in the case of speculating about Blade Runner 2049 and looking at it from other people’s perspectives. It’s just a matter of letting go at the point where the drive towards a single objective storyform ceases to be useful for me as an individual.

With that, I’d better go finish this book, or else I’ll be singularly, objectively, and absolutely screwed. :wink:

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Running through this post, there are some things here that need to be addressed.

In the past I’ve been pretty strict when it comes to people suggesting their own version of the Dramatica theory–in fact, it’s one of the first things mentioned when you sign up. But I can see now that the confusion that drives this kind of thinking is based on a misunderstanding of the theory itself, so I’ll do my best to clarify what Dramatica is, and what Dramatica isn’t.

Plus, I can’t get rid of @decastell - he gives me too much to write about!

The model does have a bias. That’s how it works–in fact, that’s the only way it can work. Without bias you have no position, no place to stand, and therefore would be open to all kinds of subjective interpretations (pretty much the problem with many discussions like this).

Don’t know how I missed this one the first time around, but this is brilliant, clear and succinct - if your hypothetical does intend to be broad enough to accommodate constituent parts of the theory as set, then it is by internal definition, a Tale and not a Grand Argument Story.

It’s not Dramatica.

You absolutely have to look at all Four Throughlines at once because you measure the accuracy of one based on the other three. You can always make an argument for a perspective in any Domain to the exclusion of the other three. This isn’t “lost in the weeds”–this is actually how Dramatica works.

The best example of this right now is the thread on The Domains of The Sixth Sense. Yes, you can make an argument for Malcom’s personal problem to be in Universe or Mind–but it fails to hold up to scrutiny when you look at the other three Throughlines–as you must.

When Dramatica says it looks at the source of the problem (inequity) it means why is being stuck in a well a problem?. Why he got stuck in the well is Backstory.

Only if you’re not taking into consideration the other four perspectives (Throughlines).

This is backwards.

Throughlines are not in Domains–Domains are in Throughlines. The Throughlines are perspectives. Perspectives, by definition, do not see the same thing–so it’s impossible that two different perspectives would find conflict in the same area.

The model doesn’t demand they be present, the reality of the difference in perspectives demands it.

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Why is it impossible for two perspectives to find conflict in the same area?

Because if I look at the same thing from two different perspectives, there’s no way it can possibly look the same.

That doesn’t stop two people with two different perspectives from both dealing with a problematic situation, or problematic activities…etc. Two people looking at a burning building won’t see the same sides but they both see a burning building.

Two different people are not two different perspectives. Two different people are a They perspective.

If you want to use the analogy of a burning building to stand in for an Inequity, then a more accurate way to describe different perspectives would be from inside the building (I) and outside the building (They).

They couldn’t possibly look the same.

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You keep equating the fact that two people (let’s say one inside a burning building and the other outside) experience different things with the idea that what they’re experiencing must be in different domains. The one doesn’t necessarily follow from the other.

I was using the example of a burning building, which I agree is not the best example. Do you understand what Dramatica means by an inequity? (not trying to be flip, but many don’t)

I understand it as the thing that’s breaking the previous balance of the story world. Good or bad, the world had been in a kind of stability, and the inequity breaks it.

Is that wrong?

More specifically - what an inequity is, an imbalance between things. The space in-between that can’t be described, only approximated by how it looks from different points-of-view.

I have an article on it: How an Inequity and a Story is Made and an archive of various posts on the subject here: Inequity - Concepts - Narrative First.

The different perspectives do not offer different “experiences” to different people – that would be different Storyminds.

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None of that demonstrates that two different perspectives can’t be in the same domain (or vice versa if you prefer)

It’s really important that you understand that perspectives are not found in Domains. This isn’t something you can change back and forth (vice versa)–unless you’re looking subjectively.

Different perspectives see the same inequity differently.

For instance, when looking at a problem of self-identity (which is already one step removed from the actual inequity), I might see the problem as something about my past that I cannot change or don’t know everything about. You would see the problem as a memory that tells you all you need to know (“The artist leaves a part of herself in every work…”).

Because You see things differently than I do, yet share some things in common with me (we both don’t see this inequity as static) I’m inspired to reconsider my point-of-view.

If I see the problem as something about my past that I cannot change or don’t know everything about and You see the problem as something your past that you cannot change or don’t know everything about where is the motivation to grow?

If this doesn’t help explain why different perspectives (in relation to I) see inequities differently, hopefully it explains why you wouldn’t want them to anyways.

If I were writing a story about and “I” and a “you” who both saw the problem as something in “my” past and in “your” past that neither of us could change and don’t know everything about, the motivation to grow would come from the different reactions to those static states.

I have no trouble seeing benefits to uniquely assigning each domain to a throughline, but I confess I’m not seeing why it’s impossible in any sense for it to be otherwise.

Then it wouldn’t be about a past that neither of us could change, it would be about different reactions. But this would be inaccurate as you’re referring to reactions – subjective again – instead of looking at the inequity itself.

We’re getting into that rabbit hole where words start having meanings that aren’t accessible to both parties – a conceptual space where there’s no operating definition that doesn’t circularly rely on the terms themselves. If you define “inequity” as meaning “something that can’t be seen, described, or understood except by having four Dramatica domains applied to four Dramatica throughlines”, then we’re at a place that both makes it impossible to define the constituent parts of Dramatica without unconditionally accepting an unproven premise. We’re also at a point where I’d have to say that I can confidently write an engaging, meaningful, and satisfying story that doesn’t have what Dramatica would consider an inequity – which seems contrary to the very purpose of the theory.

[Edit] On reflection, this probably reads as a little more strident than is productive. I’m just trying to get across that when a nomenclature is critical to a discussion, it has to be accessible to both parties through the presence of some separate source (like a dictionary). But here we keep getting terms that flow neither from a conventional dictionary nor the Dramatica dictionary, which makes it difficult if not impossible to reach agreement.

This may be your experience, but it’s not everyone’s experience. “Rabbit hole” seems to be a fallback point when I fail to accurately describe the way a perspective works when looking at an inequity and I’ll try my best to explain it a different way. I think it’s important lest anyone else reach this same level of confusion.

The weird part is that you say something like “when a nomenclature is critical to a discussion, it has to be accessible to both parties through the presence of some separate source”, yet many understand this idea of how perspective and inequity works…but I will sleep on it and see if I can’t find a better way to explain it in the morn!