I rewatched The Hunt for Red October last night with an eye to trying to figure out its storyform. Here’s what I came up with:
MC: Jack Ryan, an analyst in the CIA
Resolve: Steadfast - he never doubts that Ramius plans to defect (although he wishes at times he would have just “put it in a memo”)
Jack is a Do-er - he gets on a plane even though he hates it, he puts his life on the line to help Ramius numerous times, even though he met the man only once at a dinner.
I’m not sure about his PS style, but since this is an action movie I’m guessing Logical.
Outcome: Success
Judgment: Good - Jack overcomes his fear of flying, which was his biggest personal problem.
IC: There are several, but the one who changes the most would be Bart Mancuso, the submarine captain, who goes from serious skepticism to giving Ramius his weapon!
OS Throughline: Situation - a man has taken a nuclear submarine without authorization, and his motivation is unclear
Concern: probably The Present - will Ramius blow up the US and start WWIII?
I’m liking Attempt as the Issue:
- Jack is attempting to do something no one thinks he can.
- Ramius is doing the same.
- Jonesy (the radarman) attempts to find a sub that no one is sure is even there, even when being mocked for trying.
- The Soviets are trying desperately to find and kill Ramius yet not sure they can either.
Problem: Protection?
- Ramius trying to keep the Red October away from the Soviets
- The US trying to keep the Soviets away from a juicy opportunity
Not sure about how the IC and MC fit into this. Maybe each is trying to get the other to quit interfering in what they’re trying to do … Mancuso wants this crazy guy off his boat, where Ryan wants to save Ramius from the Soviets
That would put the Consequence as Contemplation, which makes sense.
MC Throughline: Activitiy - duh, action movie
MC Problem: Nonacceptance - Ryan can’t accept that Ramius would take the Red October for any other reason but to defect
MC Issue: Preconditions - Ryan’s got this in spades - everyone is trying to tell him what he can and can’t do, down to the snippy guy upset with how he’s dressed
I find it interesting that the story engine is giving me a Critical Flaw of Attraction. Could Ryan’s empathy with Ramius risk taking him too far, so far that he actually doesn’t succeed? I didn’t see that in the film, but this is something worth thinking about. What other ways could Attraction cause his downfall? I suppose if Ramius wasn’t as brilliant a man as Ryan thought, following his apparently suicidal commands could have gotten them into a heap of trouble.
Anyway, this is what I came up with. Thoughts?