It’s less about criticism and more that Civil War has been discussed a LOT on this forum. Pretty much every aspect has been picked apart, as well as debating a bunch of different storyforms. A quick search will lead you to:
As well as a number of Narrative First articles and a couple of podcasts. And there’s a storyform already in the Narrative First Subtext app (more up-to-date than the Dramatica site).