Oh wow, so glad that analogy was helpful! And yeah, if you think of those different perspectives like voices in your head… the one speaking subjectively (MC) i’ll represent with Luke Skywalker. The one pointing out an alternative view (IC), I’ll represent that one with Obi-Wan Kenobi and Han Solo. The more objective one is what I’ll have Everyone in Star Wars processing… etc.
For me, it’s helped to think of the Influence throughline as being the voice that influences the subjective part of the mind to either change their motivation, or hold onto it.
These are all looking good to me overall. They just need the other side of the source of conflict. Each throughline is processing its own mental dilemma.
“I need to become something so I don’t get something negative, UNLESS… (and then some form of Conceiving leads to Situation/Circumstances/State of Being/Sense of Self)”
For the OS in Future, I think i’m just missing the “Situation” or “Universe” problem. Sometimes it helps me to think of this one as one’s “position” or “standing” in their Universe. It could be someone about to be stuck somwhere. It could be someone who is going to be something (like going to be a spouse).
The Future-ing should be about their position. Everyone envisions a future role for themselves, or they see themselves moving to a new town, etc.
For the RS, make sure to talk about the relationship and how it’s growing. The way it’s written frames it in the “I” perspective. Instead, maybe:
The relationship grows by experiencing love so it can be thought of as a good thing, EXCEPT…